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PostSubject: Keyeo Vasser (Approved)   Mon Feb 08, 2016 11:14 pm


Name: Keyeo Vasser
Clan: The Vasser Clan
Age: 15
Gender: male
Village: cloud

Rank: Genin
Specialty: Taijutsu
Elements: Raiton [Lighting]

Appearance: Keyeo has brown skin and sky blue eyes and he if average as far as height goes he has a muscular build. and wears a white cloak with the vasser family crest over the heart. he likes to carry around a katana.
Personality: Keyeo is a real open and honest person. he is easy going and likes to relax. he hates taking life for any reason but he will resort to killing on order to complete a mission. The reputation of his clan leads him to be alienated and looked down upon by others as nothing but a cold blooded killer.
History: Being a member of the Vasser Clan born of a Shi no kamigami parent his path was lain out in front of him, we would grow up to join the legendary group of assassin. so from a early age he was placed in the special training school and learned to summon his very own Immortal Chakra Blade manifesting as a 5 ft katana. He was a fast learning mastering his ability faster than most, And he spent alot of his free time practicing. at the age of thirteen he was sent out on his first mission a a full fledged Shi no kamigami. Once he got to his target and thrust his blade into his very first victim and felt as his life literally left his body and came into his own. he knew he couldn't continue doing this. So at the age of fourteen he asked his Clan leader if he could become a shinobi For the cloud village instead of being an assassin for the clan. The clan leader let him making him promise the clan comes first and if he is summoned back he must return or he will be hunted down and executed. He accepted the terms and became a cloud shinobi and does assassinations anytime his Clan leader sends him on one.


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PostSubject: Re: Keyeo Vasser (Approved)   Tue Feb 09, 2016 12:04 am

Hey, I like everything but the fact he left his main village. If you really want to RP that he is living in another village can you change the clan to be from a minor country. It would make more sense, sense a war has just ended, ninja wouldn't be able to leave a village without becoming missing nin, and if so it would be un wise for a village to accept an enemy villages shinobi in.

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PostSubject: Re: Keyeo Vasser (Approved)   Tue Feb 09, 2016 1:10 am

Ok, i forgot about the war. your right so i just changed a little bit at the end to make him ask to be a cloud shinobi. does that fix work?
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PostSubject: Re: Keyeo Vasser (Approved)   Tue Feb 09, 2016 3:32 pm

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Name: Keyeo Vasser
Clan: The Vasser Clan
Age: 15
Gender: male
Village: cloud

Rank: Genin
Specialty: Taijutsu
Elements: Raiton [Lighting]

Appearance: Keyeo has brown skin and sky blue eyes and he if average as far as height goes he has a muscular build. and wears a white cloak with the vasser family crest over the heart. he likes to carry around a katana.
Personality: Keyeo is a real open and honest person. he is easy going and likes to relax. he hates taking life for any reason but he will resort to killing on order to complete a mission. The reputation of his clan leads him to be alienated and looked down upon by others as nothing but a cold blooded killer.
History: Being a member of the Vasser Clan born of a Shi no kamigami parent his path was lain out in front of him, we would grow up to join the legendary group of assassin. so from a early age he was placed in the special training school and learned to summon his very own Immortal Chakra Blade manifesting as a 5 ft katana. He was a fast learning mastering his ability faster than most, And he spent alot of his free time practicing. at the age of thirteen he was sent out on his first mission a a full fledged Shi no kamigami. Once he got to his target and thrust his blade into his very first victim and felt as his life literally left his body and came into his own. he knew he couldn't continue doing this. So at the age of fourteen he asked his Clan leader if he could become a shinobi For the cloud village instead of being an assassin for the clan. The clan leader let him making him promise the clan comes first and if he is summoned back he must return or he will be hunted down and executed. He accepted the terms and became a cloud shinobi and does assassinations anytime his Clan leader sends him on one.

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PostSubject: Re: Keyeo Vasser (Approved)   Tue Feb 09, 2016 5:42 pm

i had to edit some of your post because it was still saying leaf, but your cloud...i think thats what yall agreed on. You changed the last sentence to say cloud but it still say leaf in 2 other spots.

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